alc24  +  964597 Sat, 07 Nov 09 09:27 PM Could someone help me with this sentence? please 1 My credit card withdrawals didn't appear on my back account right away and in the meantime I had deposited money into my account. So my balance read more than I actually had since the bank hadn't taken into account my latest withdrawals and since I owed an establishment some money they seized what I owed them. Basically because of the lag between when I withdrew money from my account and the transaction appeared on my account, I found myself overdrawn and paying fees to the bank. and these two I'm not sure of 1 money transfer from account to account are overnighted/are done overnight. 2 You're nickname and picture doesn't correspond to the way you play. You're nickname is "generousplayer3" yet its very hard to get all your chips. You should be called "cheapplayer3". (is correspond the right word?) thank you alc24 Joined on Sat, Jul 25 2009 Contributing Member 1,447 Sentences

	DougLewis  +  964821 Sun, 08 Nov 09 03:57 AM They are paragraphs more than sentences. A sentence ends when there is a period "." several sentences together are called a paragraph. In paragraph 1. It is an issue of timing between depositing into an account and taking money out. Because of the timing error funds were withdrawn before the deposit was added. This resulted in being "overdrawn" on the account resulting in unfair fees being charged. 1. Para 2. Is a caution that it may take over night before the transaction completes. 2. Para 2. A person is complaining that "generous player" is acting in an opposite manner than the nic name suggests and that because generous player never loses the bet... that the nic name should be cheap player 3. (sarcasm). DougLewis Joined on Sun, Nov 8 2009 Canada New Member 35 Paragraphs, Writing, Sentences, Mistakes

	alc24  +  965750 Mon, 09 Nov 09 03:51 AM THank you, Your corrections might look good on paper but if you were to say it to someone like that it wouldn't sound to natural? How would you say the 3 sentences without rewording them too much? thank you so much alc alc24 Sentences

	DougLewis  +  965752 Mon, 09 Nov 09 03:55 AM I am sorry. I thought you were having difficulty understanding what the items mean. What you are looking for is how to say them to someone so they can be understood easily. Is that correct? DougLewis Sentences, Apologies

	alc24  +  966343 Mon, 09 Nov 09 04:32 PM Yes please, how would say that in spoken without rewxording them too much. thank you alc24 Sentences

	DougLewis  +  966355 Mon, 09 Nov 09 04:41 PM You could try replacing correspond with "match" or "suite" DougLewis Sentences

	alc24  +  966360 Mon, 09 Nov 09 04:49 PM OK thanks , and for the withdrawal paragraph had would you say it? and is it overnighted or done overnight, how would you say? thanks alc24 Paragraphs, Writing, Sentences

	DougLewis  +  966370 Mon, 09 Nov 09 04:55 PM I would say "happen overnight" probably, if I were speaking it. Of course, you need to re-phrase the sentence(s) to fit the suggestions in properly. DougLewis Sentences, Speaking, Chat, Friendships

	alc24  +  966378 Mon, 09 Nov 09 05:07 PM I tried doing it, but I'm having trouble rephrasing, could you help me rephrase it maybe? thanks a million alex alc24 Sentences