'I can give you rich undreamed of' - rich as a noun? Riches.
'or I can give you hurt unbeared of' - hurt as a noun? I can cause you unbearable pain
'I have my baseborn army underdeveloping somewhere in this world'- baseborn used correctly? What are you trying to say? What does "underdeveloping" mean?
'The math question is so clouding' - clouding used correctly? No. Try confusing.
'My grand father had fathered my father, and now he's fathering me how to father my son to father his'- Is this ok? I'm sorry, but this makes NO sense. Are you talking about "raising"?
'flamboyant'- does this word mean gay looking? Despire MH's refuting this, if you describe a man as being flamboyant in appearance, I'm going to make some assumptions about his sexual orientation.
'hopping about on one leg'- is this the same meaning as 'jumping about on one leg'? Yes. Hopping by definition is on one leg.
'he's about to flush our squad's total reputation down the toilet, with pee in it'- is this ok for meaning bringing down a reputation to nothing? suggestion? You don't need the "with pee in it." It ends up making it childish sounding. I would also omit the word "total."