A better Leave Letter

Anon, do you want this to be corrected? You need to

1) Capitalize

2) Check your spelling.

Is 45 days of leave really an option where you work? Wow.

Start by writing down what you would say if you were simply have a conversation.

Hi,

Please begin by writng down and showing us what you would say if you were talking face to face with the embassy official. Then we can help you with comments.

Clive

Hi,

Begin just by writing what you would say if you were talking to her face to face. Then post it here for comments.

Clive

Hi,

Dear Miss Jayalakshmi,

                                     I would like to request leave for 3 days, from 21st. to 24th of December, so that I can attend my sister's wedding.

I will be very grateful for your permission.

                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                                                                   G. Niharika.

You need to be careful to use capital letters correctly.

Clive