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BW2/3  #237154  Sat, 17 Jun 06 05:51 PM

My city was first the one to suggest a bill to  to ban phone using while driving.

Is this sentence OK?

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Clive  #237172  Sat, 17 Jun 06 06:35 PM

Hi,

My city was first the one to suggest a bill to  to ban phone using while driving.

My city was the first to suggest a bill to ban phone use by drivers.

In Canada, a city enacts 'bylaws', and do not deal with bills or laws. 

Best wishes, Clive

  
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