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Latest post Sun, Jan 15 2006 7:47 AM by Darkcontender. 3 replies.
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Anonymous  +  179694 Fri, 06 Jan 06 02:34 PM
<ul class="anf_list">Notes: Hiya. I'm in 9th grade and I made this poem for my portfolio. My friends told me it's good so I decided to post it. Tell me what you think..


Tears roll down my cheeks when I’m alone
As I cry in my bed, facing the world all on my own
I dream of a place of sanity
Where all my pains will be put to an end
Not in a dark and sullen place like this
So I would no longer need to pretend
I hide my emotions under fake ones
As my heart suffers deep inside
The reason of my existence is still unknown
But I hope someday this hell will be overthrown
Sometimes I fear that I would never recover
That I would never wake up from this nightmare
I dream of being a bird so I could fly
But it never happens even when I try
I struggle for love and happiness
Still, all I get are despair and loneliness
I hope someday these eyes of mine will dry
So that finally, for once, I wouldn’t cry</ul>
maj, 3 yr 321 days ago
I think it is an excellent poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Tearsofjoy  +  180737 Mon, 09 Jan 06 05:13 PM

I love it. I hope you're more positive than this normally, though Right Hug [}]. It's certainly good enough for your portfolio.

Cheers,

 - Joy.

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Darkcontender  +  183427 Sun, 15 Jan 06 07:47 AM
thanks for the support guys. . . (logged in to my account)
i hope i can be better.
but it's so hard to write one without an inspiration.
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