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Latest post Thu, Jan 29 2009 9:42 AM by Kawthar.K.. 4 replies.
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Kawthar.K.  +  655503 Tue, 27 Jan 09 02:00 PM
Everytime I go to sleep
I think that sleep will ease the pain
But everyday when I wake up
I always feel quite the same
In my mind, I have made up
I am the only one to blame
For this separation is killing me
And in my head I feel deranged
In my heart I feel such loss
Even the deepest words won't explain
So many talks that we have had
Now it is all gone in vain
But for what cause should we give up
We've restrained ourselves with this love-chain
Please, my love, don't lose hope
Just believe and have some faith
You be the only one I've loved this much
Now tell me that you're game
Because with you, I am in love
You've made my life FAR from being plain
I miss you loads and I hope you know,
that all that crosses my mind is your name.






Please, take the time to read and tell me what you think. I'd love to know, even if you think it's corny :)
Joined on Sun, Dec 7 2008
Kuwait;
Junior Member 69
rootlesstree  +  655520 Tue, 27 Jan 09 02:54 PM
Hey, i really loved it! who wrote it? i really liked it. I don't think it's corny but well that's my opinion and it's quite subjective.
Good luck

Rootless tree
Joined on Tue, Jan 20 2009
Buenos Aires, Argentina
New Member 17
Kawthar.K.  +  655523 Tue, 27 Jan 09 03:10 PM
Oh you doo?!!
I wrote it last night, I was feeling pretty crappy
But hey! Your feedback is a total booster!
Thank you! :D
KPP, 298 days ago
It's really good I like it alot =)
Kawthar.K., 296 days ago
Thank you very muuch! :D
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