Dear Sushi*,
Thank you very much for your words. They made me very happy. I agree with you on the importance of writing in English or any other foreign language different from ours. It's really an important, enjoyable and useful thing to do. You know, it's great for me to find an Arabic speaker who's writing English poems too. I would really love to read some of your poems. By the way, believe it or not, the best lines you liked of my poem are the same lines I like most. Good luck for you too!

Hi Samarnh_p,
Thank you for taking some time to read my poem and comment on it. I see what you mean when you talk about repetition in a poetic work. You are right about that. Repetition can be sometimes an advantage and sometimes an obstacle. I hope you can point out some of the repetitions you feel are not helping my poem. Thank you. It's great to know that you like what I wrote.

By the way, there is a grammatical mistake in my poem that I have lately noticed. I should have said "But why wasn't I bold enough?" instead of "But why weren't I bold enough?"