[title]Family quotes[/title] [description]Welcome to our family quotes section! Here you'll find some of the funniest (and wisest) quotes on the subject of family life![/description]
Learn English and meet people on the world’s largest EFL social network

A silly poem

ESL Writing » Poetry

We have partnered with TradePub to bring you free industry magazines and resources - no coupons or credit cards required!

Visit: englishforums.tradepub.com


Share this topic:
This is a discussion thread.
Latest post Fri, Sep 9 2005 5:50 PM by anita_a. 3 replies.
| |
anita_a  +  134905 Wed, 07 Sep 05 11:45 PM
I saw the sun rise next to my window,
Am very thrilled to say hello to the dew drops.
In every walk on the beach I have found shells.
Love the way life is leading me on,
With all that I wish for being fulfilled.
My heart leaps up to catch the rainbows;
Life has granted me a boon of love.
And all I care for now is my being with you,
Want time to stop and let us be together forever.
To live and die and live again for eternity,
Live life with love, love and more love.
All that I want in life is here and now,
Over the greener pastures as I ascend with you.
Again know me with the first words of each sentence.
anita_a
Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004
Sunny California
Regular Member 822
Cheers,Anita
The Sweet Desert  +  135306 Thu, 08 Sep 05 10:35 PM
I guess that you should'nt have called it , silly, because when someone is in love, all of what you said is natural. I think that poets should write whatever is there in their minds because if they didn't , they'd certainly feel depressed. We don't have to be Shakespeares, because people differ in their talents and abilities. For example, when I read some comments of native speakers about your poems, dear anita, I felt scared and decided not to post any of my poems. I would'nt call them silly for I like them and besides the fact that I am not a NATIVE speaker. Your lines are nice and they would be excellent for those who are head over heels in love with someone. Please carry on composing poems and never stop.Big Smile [:D]Big Smile [:D]
The Sweet Desert
Joined on Wed, Aug 24 2005
Kingdom of S.A
Full Member 314
When people choose to live by life's will, fate can do nothing but give in.
Related discussions
anita_a  +  135617 Fri, 09 Sep 05 05:48 PM

Thanks Sweet D. Though it is not exactly a love poem, it was experimental as the first word of each line put together makes a sentence.

My sincere advice to you is that if you know any language, you can compose poems in it if THE ABILITY TO WRITE POEMS IS IN YOU.You don't need to be a native speaker for that.I am not a native speaker either.
anita_a
anita_a, 4 yr 79 days ago
And criticism is the best way to learn to write better.Don't worry and go ahead and post your poems.Smile [:)]
Welcome to Englishforums.com, the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network.

Places to start

Browse Englishforums

© MediaCet Ltd. 2009, v5.0.3616.28671. All content posted by our users is a contribution to the public domain, this does not include imported usenet posts.*
For web related enquires please contact us on webmaster@mediacet.com, status updates are available at status.mediacet.com.
*Usenet post removal: Use 'X-No-Archive'. You may not have understood that your posts would end up in the public domain. Please send proof of the poster's email, we will remove immediately.