hey people
i need some correction and some advices.
i have some paragraphs but i think that these paragraphs can be more effective and more literarisch.
What do you advise? How could we make these better? I need to find a way tell this in a more effective style.
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"I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a
Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
In 2007, i started to adminstration and management internships
in Kadim . Kadim is a manufacturer of decorative radiators. I learnt
management skills, applications and politics of the firm."
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"During my education i started to work in Xel Chemicals. Xel is manufacturer of constructional paints. I started to work in 2007. I
worked as a domectic and international sales responsible. I prepared marketing
reports. I had phone calls with
customers ( domestic or foreign). I provided requirements of customers.
I started to Mascoline Co. in June, 2009 in İstanbul. I worked
in Mascoline Co. as purchasing export import responsible for 2,5 months. 2 months
officially, half month unofficially
I was dealing with international trade jobs. I prepared
export documents. I performed purchasing processes. I was the charged person to
provide coordination between planning, quality control, logistics and
production departments."
best regards