Sit aboard in a cozy restaurant

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Angliholic  #447715  Thu, 29 Nov 07 07:10 AM

You can sit aboard in a cozy restaurant and look out at an endless sea of ice. Then feel the ship shudder as it moves through the water, crushing/breaking the ice in its path.

To begin with, is aboard dispensable in the above? If not, what does it signify here?

Second, are crushing and breaking always interchangeable? Thanks.

  
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Feebs11  #447764  Thu, 29 Nov 07 10:57 AM
This is a brochure selling a cruise. You need "aboard" to underline that the restaurant in on the ship.

By the same token, although you can say either crush or break, "crushing" is much more evocative.
  
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Angliholic  #447787  Thu, 29 Nov 07 11:47 AM

 Feebs11 wrote:
This is a brochure selling a cruise. You need "aboard" to underline that the restaurant in on the ship.

By the same token, although you can say either crush or break, "crushing" is much more evocative.

Thanks, Feebs.

Got it.

By the way, I find the way you write very refined and descriptive, and maybe I'd like to use your wording sometime. But I have to make sure of the meanings of the bolded parts in your post. I guess they refer to Likewise/Similarly and expressive/vivid/descriptive respectively, right?

  
Feebs11  #447931  Thu, 29 Nov 07 08:12 PM
Gee, thanks Embarrassed [:$]

Yes, broadly you are right. Evocative means evoking strong images, memories, or feelings.
  
Angliholic  #447999  Fri, 30 Nov 07 12:56 AM

 Feebs11 wrote:
Gee, thanks Embarrassed [:$]

Yes, broadly you are right. Evocative means evoking strong images, memories, or feelings.

Thanks, Feebs.

Just to make sure, based on your reply, I presume evocative is much stronger than vivid/descriptive/pictureque, right?

  
Feebs11  #448007  Fri, 30 Nov 07 01:23 AM
Stronger, but not necessarily much stronger. It's a useful word!
  
Angliholic  #448027  Fri, 30 Nov 07 02:37 AM

 Feebs11 wrote:
Stronger, but not necessarily much stronger. It's a useful word!

Thanks, Feebs.

I like the way you use the word "evocative." Your writing is very evocative.

  
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