About the tenses 4

 Can you give me some comments?

1. In this world, I believed that everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Susan. We met each other since were seven years old.

2. Susan is the daughter in her family. She lives with her parents at Taman Jia. She is a helpful, kind hearted and hardworking girl.

3. Two years ago, I fractured my elbow after falling from my scooter-bike. Luckily, it was my left elbow. However the doctor had to place a cement cast on my hand. I could only move my fingers. During this period, Susan had been very kind and helped me to carry my bag at times.

4. Last year, when I felt sick because of dengue, I was absent for school for one week. Susan had helped to pass my homework to my sister. When I recovered, she taught me the lessons that I missed.

5. Besides that, we have the same hobbies. Our hobbies are drawing and reading books. I also help her in her weak subjects like English and Mathematics. At the same times, she also help me in my weak subjects.

6. Since this is the last year we are in the primary school, I will make sure that I always keep in touch with her. Hopefully, our friendship will last a long time.

No, this is not my homework. There are some members here encourage me to write in a short passage. As like last time, I just give a ssentence. They can't get a meaning from the context. besides, they said I would get use and improve myself instead of a sentences.

At first, I scared to do so. They would assumed I give loads of work for you all. but, after they gave me pieces of advice, so, I write in a context. Hopefully, you can understand.