1) I want to ask whether he has right to mention the constitutional reform , whether he has followed it himslef, and whether he is flowing in the right direction, indeed.
I thought whether in this sentence is redundant, so I omitted the second and third whether.
2) I want to ask whether he has right to mention the constitutional reform, he has followed it himself, and he is flowing in the right direction, indeed.
Can this read like first sentence?