I want to know about vocabulary

Message: To,
XXX
XXX
India,

From,
XXX
XXX
USA,

RE: Original certificate

Dear Sir,

I graduated from your school/college in 2003, and have not yet received my certificate of graduation. I now require this urgently, and would be pleased if you would arrange to send it to me.

Thank you in anticipation,

Yours faithfully

XXXX XXXX

Hi hemantchavan,

It's a little bit difficult to know what sort of letter you are writing here. Is it a love letter, or a letter to a friend?

OK. It needs a bit of rewording then. To western ears, the concept about you dreaming of having your friend beside you in bed sounds a little strange, to say the least.

Dear XXX

I'm sorry we haven't met for such a long time, but I feel a bit shy. I remember when I talked with you and my friend Kunal last year, we did talk about meeting again, but I still feel shy.

I miss not seeing you, and sometimes I even dream about you. I would really like to be good friends with you.

Just to let you know, I will complete my Diploma in June this year, and then I'm going back home. It's important to learn as much as possible. If you have good computer skills, you will always be able to get a job.

I think of you a lot, and send you my very best wishes as a friend.

Love

xxxxx

I dream about you every night, and when I wake up I am surprised that you are not here with me. I miss you such a lot.

Hello, Hemantchavan . I assume you wish us to correct the grammar in this letter, which I am happy to do. If you are trying to learn English, then it would be better not to use "text language" such as "how r u " You also need to pay attention to the use of capital letters after full stops, and for the personal pronoun "I". I am not going to re-write these simple errors, but I will highlight them so that you can begin to correct your own work.

You need to learn the use of the present continuous form of verbs. It is very common for people from the Indian sub-continent to misuse this form of the verb, and use it when simple present should be used.



Dear Friend,

Hello! How r u? I got your email today and i am glad to hear from you
I am doing well with my work in Pune. I went to Mumbai in May to meet my friend who is from the USA, and I stayed there for three days. We sped around in his car, which we enjoyed. Then I went to Hubli to meet my sister at her house and stayed for two days. everything was fine.

why did you leave your job in Bangalore? I thought you were interested in your work in Mumabi and even have a good salary. Am i right?

I think i will be coming to Bangalore in July. When i come to Bangalore, i will inform u by email.