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shady

#36243 Wed, 07 Jul 04 10:46 AM

it is the most dangers thing all over the world it brings death

shady

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miriam

#36257 Wed, 07 Jul 04 12:20 PM

Hello, shady Smile [:)]

Do you wish that sentence corrected?
Or you posted it as a topic for discussion/debate?

Miriam

miriam

Joined on Mon, May 10 2004

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"Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something." Plato

anon1

#36302 Wed, 07 Jul 04 05:04 PM

I think you want to write something like.

War is the most dangerous thing all over the world because it brings death.

But that sentence isn't that powerful, because a lot of "things" bring death.

Are you using this sentence in a paragraph or story? If you are, then perhaps show us the context in which you hope to use this sentence. Then we might have some other suggestions for you.

MountainHiker

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Paragraphs

migo

#36333 Wed, 07 Jul 04 08:26 PM

It can be dealt with grammatically, but even after that there'd be the issue of meaning as it is intrynsically a logical fallacy.

migo

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