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Saltukhan  #374167  Sun, 03 Jun 07 01:37 AM

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i need your help again about an abstract.

please correct errors you ve seen.

This is an abstract about betterments done in a panel radiator manufacturer company. It mentions the time and method studies. The abstract is for a graduation thesis in industrial engineering department.

ABSTRACT

 

This work includes time study and method study workinds which was done at a radiator manufacturer. In this work; Ares, is being manufactured in company, radiators’ manufacturing processes have been analysed. Information about Ares products’ manufacturing processes have been got.

 

In work study research content, work elements that forms manufacturing process have been analysed. Time study have been done for each work elements at sandpapering workshop and finish assembling welding workshop. As a result of the works done, standart times have been calculated for sandpapering and welding workshops.

 

As a result of analysing product’s manufacturing process meticulously are there work elements that can be combined or make better in the method study content have been analysed. Some betterments have been done in the process. By reason of betterments in the manufacturing process the standart time required for manufacturing have been recalculated.  

 

In conclusion existing state and proposed state have been compared  and benefits for company about standart times by betterments have been specified. 

  
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Feebs11  #374175  Sun, 03 Jun 07 02:22 AM
 Saltukhan wrote:

Hey all

i need your help again about an abstract.

please correct errors you ve seen.

This is an abstract about betterments improvements done in a panel radiator manufacturer company. It mentions the time and method studies. The abstract is for a graduation thesis in industrial engineering department.

ABSTRACT

 

This work includes time study and method study workinds which was were done at a radiator manufacturer. In this work; Ares, is being manufactured in company, radiators’ manufacturing processes have been analysed.[meaningless - rephrase this sentence - is Ares the name of the company?]  Information about Ares products’ manufacturing processes have been got.obtained

 

In the work study research content, work elements that forms the manufacturing process have been analysed. Time study have been was done for each work elements in the sandpapering workshop and finish assembling welding workshop. As a result of the works donestudy, standard times have been calculated for the sandpapering and welding workshops.

 

As a result of analysing product’s the manufacturing process meticulously, are there work elements that can be combined or made better in the method study content have been analysed. Some betterments improvements have been done in the process. By reason of betterments A result of the improvements in the manufacturing process, the standard time required for manufacturing has been recalculated.  

 

In conclusion, existing state and proposed state have been compared  and the  benefits for the company about standart times by betterments as a result of the proposed improvements have been specified. 

  
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