"According to someone" in business mail

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Velectro  #411681  Thu, 30 Aug 07 04:10 PM

Hi everybody,

I'd like to write that in accordance with my boss (Bob ad example) I must place an enquiry, so I wrote:

"According to Bob we'd like to have a goods delivery time forecast."

What do you think about?

  
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Clive  #411723  Thu, 30 Aug 07 05:41 PM
Duplicate postSmile [:)]
  
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Velectro  #411754  Thu, 30 Aug 07 06:59 PM
Yes, I wronged, is possible to remove it?
  
Clive  #411757  Thu, 30 Aug 07 07:11 PM

Don't worry about it.Smile [:)]

Clive

  
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