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Grammarian-bot  #329029  Wed, 14 Feb 07 04:04 AM

According to Henry David Thoreau, the reason a majority is allowed to rule is not that it is more likely to be right, but because it is stronger.

Is the reason in the above sentence a redundancy.

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Marius Hancu  #329030  Wed, 14 Feb 07 04:06 AM
Not redundant, except if you changed the rest.
  
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Pioussoul  #329045  Wed, 14 Feb 07 05:00 AM
 Grammarian-bot wrote:

According to Henry David Thoreau, the reason a majority is allowed to rule is not that it is more likely to be right, but because it is stronger.

Is the reason in the above sentence a redundancy.

GB

Yes, I concur with Marius in that we could paraphrase your base sentence as follows:

According to Henry David Thoreau, the reason [(that) a majority is allowed to rule] is

[not that it is more likely to be right, but because it is stronger].

 

 

  
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