Hi,
I have got a question concerning the position of respectively in the following sentence:
Which of the following alternative(s) is (are) correct?
a) "This indication is particularly strong, if the buying price is so low and the terms of business, respectively, so beneficial that they are abusive according to the relevant criteria."
Respectively here suggest that there are several terms of business
b) "This indication is particularly strong, if the buying price is so low and, respectively, the terms of business so beneficial that they are abusive according to the relevant criteria."
c) This indication is particularly strong, if, respectively, the buying price is so low and the terms of business so beneficial that they are abusive according to the relevant criteria.
It's extremely hard to understand this sentence without seeing it in its context. For example, it's hard to see how something can be so beneficial that it can be in some way abusive. I guess the context would make that clear.
In A and B, the respectively seems to apply to 'the terms of business'. It suggests that there are various sets of 'terms of business'.
In C, it seems to apply to the situation in which both the buying price is so low and the terms of business so beneficial, and suggests that there are various such situations.
However, this whole sentence seems to be written in a very unclear manner. As I said, I have a great deal of trouble in understanding it. I strongly suggest that it should be rewritten. One might consider making it into two or more sentences.
Best wishes, Clive