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HSS
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 12:01 AM
Hi.
When you place more than one adjective before a noun, you would use "and" and you wouldn't. How would you decide which to follow? Here's an example. Which sentence sounds better?
[1] She is a personable, forward-looking, proactive young lady.
[2] She is a personable, forward-looking and proactive young lady.
Thanks in advance for your help.
Hiro/ Sendai, Japan
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Goodman
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 12:27 AM
Hi, HSS
When you have two things to describe, a simple “AND” will do
When you have more than 3 items to list, use a comma afte reach item and apply an “And” before the last item.
Ex: She is warm, friendly, sincere and pretty.
I’ve invited Mary, John, Paul, Susan and my co-workers to my birthday party.
Another anternative is to use “as well as “
My new job works me to death! I have to take care of the coffee room, reception, mailroom as well as my job as a book keeper.
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Clive
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 12:34 AM
Hi Goodman,
I'd say My new job works me to death! I have to take care of the coffee room, reception, and mailroom as well as my job as a book keeper.
Best wishes, Clive
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Goodman,
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Hi Clive,
Totally understood. I was just pointing out an alternative; aside from using "and".
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HSS
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 01:42 AM
Oh-oh, I must have misled you. I know how we normally line up nouns, adverbs, etc., but I was just wondering if there was any difference between "a personable, forward-looking, proactive young lady" and "a personable, forward-looking, and proactive young lady." I somehow keep seeing nouns with more than one adjective before it withtout 'and' in the line of adjectives.
Hiro/ Sendai, Japan
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paco2004
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 02:41 AM
Hello HSS I take them as follows: She is a personable, forward-looking, proactive young lady. =The proactive young lady is personable as well as forward-looking. She is a personable, forward-looking and proactive young lady. =The young lady is personable, forward-looking, and proactive or =The young lady is not only personable but also (forward-looking and proactive). By the way I find it somehow odd that "personable" is used to describe a young lady. paco
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HSS
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 01:41 PM
Hi, Paco.
How are you? Your interpretation is quite interesting. Thanks. Just gotten back home from a long day's work, and so my brain cells are inert at the moment. But I'll certainly give it some thought later on.
Paco2004 wrote: | By the way I find it somehow odd that "personable" is used to describe a young lady.
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I used "personable" to mean "having pleasant and likable personality." Doesn't it go along with "young lady"? More of your enlightenment would be appreciated.
Hiro
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paco2004
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 04:11 PM
Hello HSS I'm sorry I was wrong. My E-J Genius dictionary says "personable" is a word used to praise young men but I have now checked it in other dictionaries (OED and Webster) and have found they do not mention such a gender bias in the use. Googlily this word is used like below. She is personable 649, He is personable 12,100. A personable young woman 228, A personable young man 875. paco
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Goodman
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Thu, 16 Feb 06 08:58 PM
Without so much the interpretation of dictionary, "personable", to me; has no gender bias. A person with a personable personality is said to be someone with warm, friendly and pleasant characteristics.
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