Advantages and Disadvantages of Smoking

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Sadeem

#245372 Thu, 13 Jul 06 10:48 PM

Advantages and Disadvantages of Smoking
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    Smoking is a bad habit widespread among teenagers.It contains dangerous items which destroy the human brain and lungs. It causes different diseases such as cancer in different areas in the human body.
       From the religious point of view,it's prohibited . There are different clear versuses in the Holy Qura'n as God says;"Don't throw yourself in the destroy."
       The reason of the teenagers' smoking is based on psychologica factors.Through smoking they think they show people that they are adult and can do whatever they want.

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Sadeem

April, 2006
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please check its structure Smile [:)]

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Clive

#245409 Fri, 14 Jul 06 01:33 AM

Hi,

please check its structure

I assume you are trying to write this as an essay. For a simple essay structure, you need paragraphs as follows.

INTRODUCTION

POINT 1

POINT 2

POINT 3

POINT . . .

CONCLUSION

You are missing an introduction and a conclusion. Your three points are also very brief. Can you think of any other points to make?

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Anonymous

#276041 Wed, 04 Oct 06 03:24 PM

hape="_x0000_s1026">There is not as many advantages as there is disadvantages. But people that are publishing things about smoking only show people the bad affects that can be some good side effects which people that smoke like which is relaxation because of the drug in the cigarette Nicotine it makes the brain think that its relaxing and give relief to the person smoking. But there is a lot of bad side effects which can harm our bodies

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Clive

#276187 Wed, 04 Oct 06 10:24 PM

Hi,

Some people (usually women) also say that smoking helps them to stay thin.

Clive

Anonymous

#367242 Fri, 18 May 07 09:57 PM

I think theres a lot worse things in the world than smokin'... i mean theres genecide going on and all you people can go on about is people smoking Angry [:@]

Smoking isn't that bad if you only have three a day or less. Anyway i found out it decreases your changes of getting amnesia Surprise [:O]

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Feebs11

#367450 Sat, 19 May 07 12:04 PM

Also, maybe you need to establish that it is smoking tobacco that causes health problems, and what in the tobacco is dangerous. The act of smoking something is not of itself dangerous.

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chiara

#367522 Sat, 19 May 07 03:30 PM

I gave up smoking few years ago. I used to smoke a lot. As far as I know it's not only tobacco that damages your health, but also, mainly perhaps?, the substances you find in the cigarette paper, as the paper itself and tar.

Chiara

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