Hello teachers!
I wrote three letters as a homework.
I need your advice.
Any comments are welcome!!!
If there’s better expression, just let me know!
Thanks in advance!
Dear Mr.Eliott
I am a sub-manager of K.H bank.
I am writing this e-mail concerning interest rates for the deposits.
(Are there other expressions saying ‘I am writing this e-mail….’)
Due to the change in government regulations, we are able to increase the interest rates to 12%.
I hope this information would help you.
Yours truly
Ellisa
Dear Ms Tomomi
I am a sub-manager of K.H. bank.
I am writing in connection with interest rates for loans.
Unfortunately, we have been forced to increase the interest rates from 8 to 14%. This is owing to a change in government regulations which is beyond our control.
I hope this information is helpful for you.
Yours sincerely
Ellisa
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a manager of sales department at Pink company.
I am happy to tell you that we relocated our office from 3 Eliott street to 9 Queen street.
Feel free to visit our new office and see our newly released products.
Best regards
Ellisa
Manager of sales department, Pink