Need advice on the order of adjectives, thx soooo much! *v*

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adviseeker  #575686  Sun, 12 Oct 08 01:37 PM
Dear all,

Based on the rule of the "order of adjectives":
Opinion  Size  Age  Shape  Colour  Classification 

I wonder if the following adjectives are correctly placed in the sentences. Please advise, thx soo much again.

1. Ken is driving an expensive, fast and yellow car.
    May I know which group does the adjective "fast" belongs to?

2. The rabbit is cute, grey and red-nosed.

3. I want to buy a tasty, four-scooped and colourful ice-cream.
    May I know which group does the adjective "four-scooped" belongs to?

4. What a sour, rotten and disgusting bunch of grapes!

Many, many thanks for taking the time to advise! (nod) Nodding
  
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Planet Hopper  #576126  Tue, 14 Oct 08 05:41 AM
OK, first rewrite the rule, in forming strings of adjectives like that answer the questions:

How good, big and old?---What shape, colour, where from? Made ofWhat kind?/What for? + noun

Take into account that you will seldom have more than any 3 adjectives together on the same string, so, it's not such a mess.

This sequence obeys to the fact that the closer to the noun, the most objective/important the quality is...start your group with your opinion and go on narrowing the scope. Last information the most obvious, defining one.

Examples/queries:

1 fast to a car to me is an answer to How good, the same as expensive. Too much emphasis may be piling if you use two adjectives of the same sort.
2 Being red nosed is a temporary quality, it doesn't fit at the end of the group, it's subjective...I'd say cute, red-nosed, grey rabbit
3 Remember 2 put a comma before the and. Four-scooped is shape, one of these italian ice-creams with four scoops (balls of ice-cream)
4 Can fruit be sour and rotten at the same time? They are stages, no? disgusting is very subjective, should be upfront
  
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