Age creeps up on us all...

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Jackson6612  #480813  Sat, 23 Feb 08 09:08 PM
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Age creeps up on us all all the time and taking us closer to the death. But we don't realise it, thinking of ourselves as immortals. It's in that precise moment when the death eclipses everything except our memories and in those memories we find ourselves playing in the meadows of childhood, we come to realise that

  
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Verade  #480851  Sat, 23 Feb 08 11:55 PM

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Age creeps up on us all all the time and takinges us closer to the death. But we don't realise it, thinking of ourselves as immortals. It's in that precise moment when the death eclipses everything except our memories and that in those memories we find ourselves playing in the meadows of childhood, and we come to realise that... Smile

 
  
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