Hello Katsudon
Hello Guest.
G: ? I'm a Japanese student and learning English in school. ? {questionable, possibly ungrammatical}
K: One has to be very careful in the deployment of these 'rules' you learn. I'm sure you've learned that you can drop the subject in coordinated clauses, but you can't in your sentence above.
I'm a Japanese student and I'm learning English in school.
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G:
My dictionary (Random House E-J) says we can omit in "although" clauses, when the subject is the same as that of the main clause..
(e.g.) Although [he was] a man of the world, he was simple and direct.
(e.g.) Although [he was] a competent person, he was not recommended to the project member?
K: As I've already mentioned, just because a rule allows potentialities for a given construction does NOT mean that every collocation works. If this is a new version of that dictionary, it may have given you solid advice. If it's an older version, I'd recommend that you recycle the paper.
Let me explain this further. You can construct many grammatical sentences; grammatical means that the word order is correct, all the parts of speech are used and yet, as is so often the case in Japan, it is just not English. If you read Japanese translations to English, they are very often unnatural, many times incomprehensible.
There are many reasons for this, but one of the major ones is the overuse and misuse of J-E dictionaries. There's a reason that Japanese speakers all produce the same errors.
Using all the different pronouns, {he/she/we/they/I} I googled the phrase,
"Although (a)competent speaker(s), {subject pronoun}"
and I never even got one hit.
That's why it seemed odd to me. I recognize the grammaticality of something but language is much much more than simply gluing grammatical strings together. I'd say that though this structure is grammatical, and it probably is possible to use it with other word combinations, it is not a natural collocation.
Regarding,
Although competent, ...
Results 1 - 8 of about 11 English pages for "Although competent, he".
Results 1 - 5 of about 8 English pages for "Although competent, she".
Results 1 - 4 of 4 English pages for "Although competent, they".
Results 1 - 9 of about 18 English pages for "Although competent, I".
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