vasuarm  +  937922 Sun, 11 Oct 09 02:15 PM Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.   Sorry, Lessing,” I sputtered “It’s because of us you couldn’t watch the sky show”   “Cut it,” she laughed. “I could watch all the fireworks the next year. But you couldn’t. You are our guests, going to stay here for a short period.”   “What a hospitality” I exclaimed with overwhelming emotion.   “Say, American hospitality,” Lessing laughed, and in no time disappeared into the crowds.   While the sky still remained grey, I felt a lot of fireworks cracking in my mind, and ultimately they burnt- out all the misconception I had about America.   *   vasuarm Joined on Mon, Apr 6 2009 New Member 46 Sentences, Countries, United States, American, Apologies

	nona the brit  +  938258 Sun, 11 Oct 09 08:00 PM Sorry, Lessing,” I sputtered “It’s because of us you couldn’t watch the sky show” (do you mean fireworks? 'sky show' doesn't clearly express that. I thought you were talking about a show on Sky tv)   “Cut it out,” she laughed. “I can watch all the fireworks the next year. But you can't. You are our guests, only here for a short time.” “What hospitality” I exclaimed with overwhelming emotion.   Say,(not sure what the 'say' is for) American hospitality,” Lessing laughed, and in no time disappeared into the crowds.   While the sky still remained grey, I felt a lot of fireworks cracking in my mind, and ultimately they burnt- out all the misconceptions I had about America.   *   [/quote]  nona the brit Joined on Wed, Sep 22 2004 England Veteran Member 11,713 The name says it all. Countries, United States, Speaking, Chat, American, Friendships, Apologies