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School summer holidays should be shorter.
Should school summer holidays be shorter? Children and teenagers in school age
during the year have enough days off school, however everyone has right to have
proper summer holidays, doesnt he?
First of all going to school and all those school
events may be stressful to students that aren't so self confident, moreover some of them may
have not coped all the difficulties at school and it might lead to the tragedy. In an extreme situation
to the suicides of youths. Secondly apart from such extreme situations like suicides, shorter holidays
can be a reason of internal problems to the young people. Such decision releted to cutting their holidays time
will likely face strong opposition. I think a compromise would be the best choice.
My point is that cutting the number of days free from school will not be accepted by students,
it expects to be done warily. Compromises are the key for success.
Another important point is, does shorter vacation help students to acquire better education? What about the held travels during holidays,
in my point of view they give great opportunities to find out more about the culture of a other country, not to mention about the foreign languages.
It seems to me that holidays shouldn't be shortened, teenagers need holidays to rest from stress they're supposed to
face at school. Lack of holidays would be strongly unhealthy, due to the too fast pace of life.
Is there any person on the earth appropriate strong to handle working in stress for all his life not having holidays?
PS: Sorry I am a beginner in writing essays