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Stevenukd  +  379593 Thu, 14 Jun 07 07:07 PM

Dear Teachers,

1. He never harms or beat animals. He's also an animal lover.

- Is this sentence ok to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.

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Doll  +  379596 Thu, 14 Jun 07 07:10 PM
It seems okay to me but I don't know what others think Smile [:)]
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Yoong Liat  +  379598 Thu, 14 Jun 07 07:14 PM
 Stevenukd wrote:

Dear Teachers,

1. He never harms or beat animals. He's also an animal lover.

Stevenukd.

He never harms or beats animals.

I would say  "He never harms animals as he is an animal lover."
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New2grammar  +  379600 Thu, 14 Jun 07 07:16 PM

He never harms or beats animals because he is an animal lover.

The changes highlighted in blue are not necessary but it helps to connect the two sentences better.

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