Can anybody help me check out my song-lyrics?

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Anonymous  #124187  Fri, 05 Aug 05 02:59 PM

 

I am working on an album and although my English is quite tolerable, I tend to either make mistakes or not be sure about how correct my lyrics are.

Sometimes when you write a song you want to fool around a bit with words but since I'm not a native speaker I'm not sure when it's an interesting word-game and when it just sounds silly.

If there is anyone around here who likes either poetry or progressive rock and can help me with my texts I will be very thankful!!

PS If you live anywhere near Amsterdam you are also welcome to mention it!

 

lonziblat@hotmail.com

  
MrPedantic  #124359  Sat, 06 Aug 05 01:31 AM

Why not post one or two of your lyrics in the poetry section, Anon?

Then people will comment and offer help. (Or hindrance, as the case may be.)

MrP

  
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