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meimei MianDianRen  +  673484 Mon, 16 Feb 09 05:38 AM
Dear all,

Could you please edit the following sentence. The person remind me that i made a mistake. So i would reply to apologize letter to him. now, I am trying to write a letter. Could you please edit or sholud I say to another way.


Thank you for your email. I am sorry that I put the wrong name to create Athens account. I have modified your account and sent your email with new username and password. So could you please check your email and if you have any trouble please do not hesitate to contact me.

thanks a lot

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Old Man Gordon  +  673600 Mon, 16 Feb 09 09:26 AM

It is mostly good.

The second sentence should be changed to "put the wrong name on your Athens account."or "entered the wrong name when I created your Athens account."

I hope this helps

omg

 
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meimei MianDianRen, 281 days ago
thank you so much for correcting my letter.
God Bless!
Bird Of Paradise, 280 days ago
meimei MianDianRen
“Dear all,

Could you please edit the following sentence. The person remind me that i made a mistake. So i would reply to apologize letter to him. now, I am trying to write a letter. Could you please edit or sholud I say to another way.


”

Are these two sentences correct? If yes, what does it mean?

Anonymous, 279 days ago
Thank your for your email.  I am very sorry that I 'used' the wrong name to create your Athens account.  I have modified your account and enclose your new username and password.  If you have any more trouble accessing your account, please do not hesitate to contact me again.

You should not send an separate email with the username and pasword.  So, I deleted the fact that you 'sent an email' and your request that the reader 'check his email'  The reader knows you sent him an email because he is reading it!!   Include the username in password in the apology email.

NOTE:  The difference in prepositios and verb forms in these examples...

Use (noun) to (verb)                         Used the wrong name to create

Put (noun) (preposition) (place)         Put the wrong name in the name field when creating your account

Enter (noun) (preposition) (place)      Entered the wrong name in the name field when creating your account

Enter (noun) when (verb~ing)           Entered the wrong name when creating you account

 

Brian

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