Application for leave

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Anonymous  #281520  Mon, 16 Oct 06 08:27 AM

Please help me correct this letter.

I would like to take leave for 25 odd days to attend a marriage.

Dear Sir

I would like to request for leave as  I have to attend my cousin sisters marriage at our native.

I shall be highly obliged if you can permit me to take  leave from 28th of October to 20th of November.

Thank you

Regards

Max

  
Mister Micawber  #281524  Mon, 16 Oct 06 08:39 AM

Hello, Max.  I do not know which relative you are referring to by 'cousin sister'-- we do not use that form in English.  Also, may I suggest that, in my culture at least, 3 weeks is far too long to request for a wedding!



Dear Mr/Ms (Supervisor's surname):

I would like to request leave to attend my cousin sister's marriage at our home town.  I would be very grateful if you would permit me to take leave from the 28th of October to the 20th of November.

Thank you.

Sincerely yours,

Max



  
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Anonymous  #281529  Mon, 16 Oct 06 08:52 AM

Thanks a lot Micawber

Max

  
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