Application Letter

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Hi all,
Would somebody please help me with the English?
Regards,

Calvin

Dear Sir or Madam

I should like to apply for the post of Assistant Marketing Manager at your company that was advertised in the South China Morning Post on February 1, 2007.

I have worked as a senior sales engineer in electronic products for five years. My responsibility is to prepare budgets for suppliers and to monitor sales team activities. With a Bachelor degree in electronic engineering from , I am equipped to analyze technical reports and to train other junior sales engineers in my group. Three of them are from and are based in Shenzhen. I made regular visits twice weekly, sometimes staying over the weekend to complete my assigned duties. My Putonghua proficiency adequate to meet business needs. I have also studied English writing skills for business during 2006. I am a person with self imitative and can work independently. I therefore I can be an asset to your company.

My present salary is HKD15,000 and expected salary is HKD18,000.

I look forward to the opportunity of answering any questions you may have regarding my application. I would be pleased to attend an interview providing you could give me at least two days’ notice. My contact number is 1234567.

Yours faithfully,

Calvin

Encl. résumé

New Member06
I suggest that you include a CV/resume with your letter. If you do, you should add 'I enclose my CV for your attention' to your letter.

I would like to apply for the post of Assistant Marketing Manager at your company, that was advertised in the South China Morning Post on February 1, 2007.

I have worked as a senior sales engineer in electronic products for five years. My responsibility is to prepare budgets for suppliers and to monitor sales team activities. With a Bachelor degree in electronic engineering from Hong Kong University, I am equipped to analyze technical reports and to train other junior sales engineers in my group. Three of them are from China and are based in Shenzhen. I make regular visits twice weekly, sometimes staying over the weekend to complete my assigned duties.

My Putonghua proficiency is adequate to meet business needs. I have also studied English writing skills for business during 2006. I am a person with self imitative(wrong word, does not make sense) and can work independently. I therefore would be an asset to your company.

My present salary is HKD15,000 and expected salary is HKD18,000.

I look forward to the opportunity of answering any questions you may have regarding my application. I would be pleased to attend an interview if you could give me at least two days’ notice. My contact number is 1234567.

Yours faithfully,
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Thanks nona,

I am really appreciated it.
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