Hi!

Would somebody please help me by correcting this letter of application?

I would be very gratefull!!!

Regards,

Iris

Dear Sir / Madam,

We live in a world where styles change constantly. Professionals in every field, especially fashion, must be aware of these changes and possess the flexibility and imagination to stay ahead of the trends.

I have always been fascinated by design, fashion, dressing up, and playing with colours, and I have always been enchanted by different kinds of beauty. I am a true fan of your company, I buy your clothes regularly and I really love them.

The trainee education will be an extraordinary opportunity to mix my two passions in life, travelling and fashion. What I really like about your trainee education  is that you get the chance to work in various departments in different countries where you are given responsibility in different areas.

It sounds like a chance of a lifetime to become more familiar with an international working environment, to meet new people and to explore new countries.

I have studied International Business and Languages at the Hogeschool Zeeland University of Professional Education. This is an education with a combination of marketing, economics. languages, export, tourism, law, human resource management, communication and PR. Besides this, fashion has always been of great interest to me, and that is why I have worked part time in several Dutch fashion shops during my education.

During my study international business and Languages I have completed my study with a training period of a half year at the marketing department of a company in Paramaribo, Surinam. Here I got the chance to meet with PR and marketing in international surroundings. The totally different culture, the independence, the rapidly changing international contacts and the diversity ensured me a couple unforgettable months and accelerated my personal development.

I know .......seeks only the brightest and most creative applicants for the trainee education. I also know that I have the ability it takes to perform the job effectively, and that I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic, nationally recognised fashion company,

You can find my qualifications and skills in the enclosed resume. If you would like to have more information about my qualifications and skills, please contact me by e-mail or phone.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,