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Latest post Tue, Oct 30 2007 6:23 AM by Quangtrungvtv. 2 replies.
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Quangtrungvtv  +  436274 Mon, 29 Oct 07 05:20 AM

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VKX COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

                                                                                                 writter 

                                                                                         Lê Quang Trung

 please help me correct this letter? THanks very much
Quangtrungvtv
Joined on Thu, May 3 2007
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Le Quang Trung I love English very much, but I'm not proficient. Please help me to correct the grammar of the sentences above. Thank you very much!
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Neeraj Jain  +  436310 Mon, 29 Oct 07 08:23 AM

Here's my take:

I know that your company is hiring an electronics and telecommunications engineer . I found about the operations of your company. I decided to write this letter to apply for that position.

I have added the CV to let you see and select me for that position. In work , I concentrate hard. I do not hesitate to do a jobs. In addition ,my English is very good (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level). I hope that I get an opportinity to be interviewed . Please let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone. I wish to work at your company. I assure you that I will always study and teach myself to improve my skills to satisfy the job requirement at your company.

Thanks for viewing my application and the documents that I have attached. 

Sincerely yours!

Lê Quang Trung
Neeraj Jain
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Thanks Neeraj Jain very much!
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