Application letter

Hi,

Can someone plz tell me how to write a fee concession/assisstance application letter? It'll be better, if you give me some samples, too.

Thank you

Hi again,

Will someone please take a look at the following letter for any grammar mistakes?

Thank you

_____________________________________________________________________

(My Address)

Apartment Name

Area Name

City Name

Date

The principal

University Name

Area Name

City Name

Dear Sir,

This is to state that I have completed my intermediation in pre-engineering, and now I want to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your highly estimable university. Literally, since I was in elementary school I have been interested in telecommunication, and more recently, I have narrowed my goal to become a telecommunication engineer. It has always been my and mother’s wish that I study at your university, but financially I am not strong enough to afford such a massive amount of fees.

Thereby, I request you to assist me by giving me a concession of 50% at least.

Meanwhile, thank you and I assure you of my sincere and continuing efforts.

Great regards,

My Signature

My name

University Name

Full mailing address

Dear Dr [Dean's/Chairman's surname]:

I have completed my intermediation (diploma?  certificate?) in pre-engineering, and would like to pursue a BE (Telecommunications) degree at ABC University.  I have always been interested in telecommunications, and more recently I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunications engineer.  Enclosed/attached are my educational records.

Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, could you advise me of any financial assistance available?

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Name

So, finally I got help. Thank you very much, Mister Micawber.



Full return mailing address Okay, as you say Sir.

Date Okay, as you say Sir.

University Name

Full mailing address

Dear Dr [Dean's/Chairman's surname]: I don't know his name. Will it be wrong to say "Dear Sir"?

I have completed my intermediation (diploma?  certificate?) [thank you again, Sir. Yes, it's a certificate. Can I say "H.S.C."?] in pre-engineering, and would like to pursue a BE (Telecommunications) degree at ABC [Do I have to use the university name here. I am confused a bit. When I have already mentioned it above in the address section, do I again need to mention it here?]  University.  I have always been interested in telecommunications, and more recently I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunications engineer.  Enclosed/attached are my educational records. [I've already provided them with all the necesarry documents and records.]

Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, could you advise me of any financial assistance available? [They have already given me a concession of 50% with the grace of God, but they have still asked me to write an application letter for it as a red tape. I know for a fact that bluntly mentioning the desired concession is rude. Therefore, can I say "Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, could you please offer me some financial concession?"]

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Name