Hello,I am applying for a job, by e-mail, and even though they asked a short letter, this was the shortest I wrote. I would like if someone please correct it for me. I am not a native english speaker and it is important that I do not apply with any language error on it. As much as possible, please consider British. I also appreciate tips to improve it. Thank you so much.
It goes as followed:
Dear Sirs,
My name is "me", I am "nationality" and fascinated by the Scandinavian
countries. Therefore, I would like very much to move to Norway.
I have a Degree in
'Sciences of Communication – Marketing, Public Relations,
Advertisements and Journalism' and I worked for several years
managing different tasks at different levels in the organization. I
also have a good understanding of tasks related to HR as I was
supporting it.
In the past years I have
not limited myself to the fulfilment of the job demands on me. I have
been keeping abreast of my educational background, by improving my
languages skills and by taking a post-graduated programme on
Management of Systems of Quality (ISO 9000:2001).
I consider myself to be
hard-working and motivated and I believe I have good organisational
and technical skills.
Once I appreciate
challenges and I consider myself able and, as much as capable,
extremely motivated I am writing to apply for the position of
Management Assistant. I am applying for it because I identify myself
with the profile and I perfectly fulfil the requested attributes as
you can see on the CV I am sending to you.
I would be grateful if you
would consider my application. Please contact me for any further
information that you require.
Thank you very much for
your time and consideration. I look forward to your reply.
Best of regards,