Hello, JP.It is very well-written grammatically, but also very boring-- it uses all the cliches and stock phrases that cover letters are prey to. All the self-praise will count for nothing with the potential employer until an interview is held. I would suggest that, while keeping it brief, you eliminate the self-description and supply instead more details about why the company/position interests you and what specific experiences in your background most make your abilities appropriate to what is needed.
Dear
Sirs:I
am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager, as I find the
position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.
I
appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely
motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in
the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and
activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight
years of work experience, both as an employee and as a freelance
consultant. As a freelancer, I worked with companies from a wide range
of activity sectors. Hence, I have amplified considerably my
experience and empowered my professional vision. I believe I possess
the essential attributes for success: I am professional, dynamic,
autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and
technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to
new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and facility for learning despite being a woman of strong morals and firm principles.
I
would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am
available for an interview any weekday to better present my credentials.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,