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wholegrain  #546266  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:30 PM
It's clearer what you are trying to do with this sentence.

It's better what you are doing now.
  
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Mr Wordy  #546432  Fri, 25 Jul 08 11:14 PM

These are both sentences that native speakers (including me) might use, but to me they are not particularly elegant (especially the second).

In the second case I would prefer "What you are doing now is better".

The first sentence is slightly ambiguous, and without seeing the surrounding context I'm not sure if or how I might rephrase it. One possibility is "Your intended meaning is clearer in this sentence".

  
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wholegrain  #546433  Fri, 25 Jul 08 11:17 PM
Thank you
  
Goodman  #546434  Fri, 25 Jul 08 11:21 PM
I would rephrase it this way "It's more clear now what you are trying.."
I prefer "more clear" than "clearer" and adding "now" as a separator to the rest of the sentence.

# 2 is a bit iffy!
  
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