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uktous  +  964518 Sat, 07 Nov 09 06:49 PM
hi


Are the following 2 sentences grammatically correct?

And which one might be better?


sentence1

In response to your job posting, in your company's website, regarding the positions for the Graduate 2010 program, I have attached my CV and application form for your consideration.


sentence 2

Please accept my CV and application form as the expression of my interest in the positions for the Graduate 2010 program.



Note:
Graduate 2010 is the name of the graduate scheme


thanks
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Avangi  +  964602 Sat, 07 Nov 09 09:46 PM
In my opinion, they're both grammatically correct.


In response to your job postings  , in your company's website, regarding the positions for the Graduate 2010 program, I have attached my CV and application form for your consideration.
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