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Latest post Sun, Nov 8 2009 1:54 PM by Mister Micawber. 3 replies.
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zazzex  +  964113 Sat, 07 Nov 09 08:49 AM
Hello,

 

Can I use a semicolon in the following case?StartFragment>

"As for the unsatisfactory points; safety, programs, and management of the community facilities for children appeared to be unsatisfactory."

 

Or should I use ","? in this case, "," could be confusing because of following commas.

"As for the unsatisfactory points, safety, programs, and management of the community facilities for children appeared to be unsatisfactory."

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Mister Micawber  +  964276 Sat, 07 Nov 09 01:29 PM
No semicolon; use a colon.
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zazzex  +  965138 Sun, 08 Nov 09 01:47 PM
You mean I use a colon like this?

 

"As for the unsatisfactory points: safety, programs, and management of the community facilities for children appeared to be unsatisfactory."

 

Isn't a colon used to state something same?

 

 

Mister Micawber  +  965140 Sun, 08 Nov 09 01:54 PM
You mean I use a colon like this?-- Yes


Isn't a colon used to state something same?-- A colon sets off on its right an explanation, example, or details of the statement on its left.  The statement on the left should really be an independent clause, but this is sometimes ignored.


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