Anonymous:
HI!

I have written a letter of motivation.

Is it ok from a native speaker's opinion?

Would you like to give me some advice?

Thank you very much.

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Dear Sir or Madam:

With this letter, I would like to introduce my candidature for the XXXXXXX

I am a student enrolled in to pursue my Master Degree in Economics. Now I am tremendously enjoying the school’s courses, especially those concerning Macroeconomics and Development Economics since I am determined to become better skilled in such field so that I can be better positioned in the future to serve my country, which is still a developing economy.

That’s why I would like to apply to the internship program. It will give me a precious opportunity to understand international problems and the working of the XXXXXX. Moreover, I am excited by the opportunity to work with a group of experts from whom I can learn not only professional skills but also insightful ideas about the world and the economy.

My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. My mastering of 3 UN official languages should be helpful in a multi-culture working environment, and former professional experience in financial service industry should help me to adapt quickly to the job assigned.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application for the internship, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Anonymous:
I've made some edits to your extraordinary letter. Well done.

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Dear Sir or Madam:

My name is ____________ and I would like to express my interest in candidature for the ***

I am currently enrolled at Kyoto University, Japan and am pursuing my Master's Degree in Economics. I am enjoying the school’s courses tremendously. I especially enjoy those concerning Macroeconomics and Development Economics since I am determined to become better skilled in that area and then be better positioned in the future to serve my developing country.

I would like to apply to your internship program. It will give me a precious opportunity to understand international problems and the workings of the ***. Moreover, I am excited by the opportunity to work with a group of experts from whom I can learn not only professional skills but also insightful ideas about the world and the global economy.

My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. My mastering of 3 UN official languages should be helpful in a multi-cultural working environment. And former professional experience in the financial services industry should help me to adapt quickly to the job assigned.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application for the internship. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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