Hello,
Read the exerpt below to deterimine the grammar of the paragraph.
ABC stores will offer discounts and coupons which will entice customer to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to: $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month, which differs from the corporation's current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent. (is the highlighted part gramatically correct?).
Did the above sound better or is this a better way of saying it...
which differs from our current $10 back for every $200 spent, offered to customers now.
I appreciate your opinion regaring the highlighted part.