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Latest post Fri, Jun 23 2006 9:25 AM by Antonija. 4 replies.
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Antonija  +  238961 Thu, 22 Jun 06 10:47 AM

Hello,

Can you please read it and see if it is OK? Especially the bolded blue part of the sentence? Thank you.

 

Of all the processes in oil technology, the most common is hydrosulphurization process. The range of derivatives that undergo refinement process by this procedure is extensive: from light petrol, petrol, petroleum to diesel fuel and even to atmospheric residues.

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Alan.es  +  238981 Thu, 22 Jun 06 12:01 PM
Yes, it's OK. It wasn't a term known to me but it comes up straightaway on Google and is the terminology for 'the substances which are left after a distillation at atmospheric pressure'.


make sure you always put - - hydro-de-sulphurisation.
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Kajjo  +  239074 Thu, 22 Jun 06 05:55 PM
 Antonija wrote:
Of all the processes in oil technology, the most common is the hydrosulphurization process. The range of derivatives that undergo refinement <process> by this procedure is extensive: from light petrol, petrol, petroleum to diesel fuel and even to atmospheric residues.


I guess the article should be added. A native should comment on this!
I would omit the <process>, because just "refinement" is OK. Otherwise maybe "...that undergo a refinement process".

Kajjo

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Alan.es  +  239157 Thu, 22 Jun 06 11:04 PM
For me add the article 'the' and the indefinite article 'a' but also keep process in.


Of all the processes in oil technology, the most common is the hydrodesulphurization process. The range of derivatives that undergo a refinement process by this procedure is extensive: from light petrol, petrol, petroleum to diesel fuel and even to atmospheric residues.

Antonija, 3 yr 157 days ago
Thank you both.
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