Jackson6612  +  425916 Mon, 01 Oct 07 08:49 PM Please make corrections/edits to the following sentences: I don't intend any kind of offense. If you feel that something has been said bad, then it's only because of my poor command over English. My words don't always follow what I really intend to say. Jackson6612 Joined on Wed, Dec 27 2006 Senior Member 3,688 It’s a difficult question for any man to answer… Whether to follow his dreams no matter what… Or to give in slowly and let life lead you where it will.

	Feebs11  +  425919 Mon, 01 Oct 07 09:03 PM  Jackson6612 wrote: Please make corrections/edits to the following sentences: I don't intend any kind of offense. If you feel that something has been said badly, then it's only because of my poor command over of English. My words don't always follow what I really intend to say.I don't always find the right words to say what I want to say. Feebs11 Joined on Thu, Nov 23 2006 UK Veteran Member 5,015

	Jackson6612  +  425924 Mon, 01 Oct 07 09:11 PM Thanks, Feebs. Jackson6612

	Bokeh  +  425968 Tue, 02 Oct 07 01:28 AM Hi Jackson, Even with the corrections the flow of your text still seems a bit unnatural. How about something like the following instead: "I can never find words to express myself exactly as I'd like, so if I've said something odd please don't take offence as this would only have been caused by my poor command of the English language rather than any bad intent."? Bokeh Joined on Sun, Mar 18 2007 Spain Regular Member 531

	Jackson6612  +  426104 Tue, 02 Oct 07 10:37 AM Thanks, Bokeh. Jackson6612