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Abil  #527991  Mon, 16 Jun 08 09:26 AM
Villagers allege that the commander is often seen prowling in the neighbourhood dressed in civil uniform, defying army rule that soldiers must put on camouflage combat fatigues before being out of camps.

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Mister Micawber  #528036  Mon, 16 Jun 08 11:36 AM
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Villagers allege that the commander is often seen prowling the neighbourhood dressed in mufti / civilian clothes, defying an/ the army regulation that soldiers must wear camouflage combat fatigues out of camp.
  
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Abil  #528188  Mon, 16 Jun 08 03:56 PM
Thanks Mister Micawber
  
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