Please help me check the English below, thanks.
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What can be done to make your life better than before? Discuss it in the respects of your workplace, school, family, or something to those extents. Collect your thoughts and make them a decent presentation in front of the class. You are suggested to use passive voice to make sure that you can well use it grammatically.
Example:
Hi, I am Johnson.
I think for my workplace. More people must be hired. I am saying this because everyone now in my company is all tied up by their overloaded work. We are extremely understaffed.
As far as my family is concerned, our monthly living expense should be cut back for this month because excessive money were spent last month. The goods that were purchased back then are considered white elephants now.
With regard to my school, especially the English class, more than half of my classmates will be flunked due to their low grades.
About my job, my income has been...
With reference to my school life, I was awarded...
That's basically what I think need to be done to better my life.