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happylearner

#32405 Tue, 08 Jun 04 08:25 AM

Dear Teachers,

could you please check the following for mistakes for me

(The ship is still being held by the authority and did not sail
from the port yet.

there still be some legal cases against the ship owner and
the lawers names that are taking on the case are :

AND I MENTIONED THIER NAMES

many thanks

happylearner

Joined on Mon, Jun 7 2004

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Uncle Gizmo

#32483 Tue, 08 Jun 04 10:00 PM

I would suggest something along the lines:-

The ship is being held by the port authority Pending resolution of a legal issue. You may wish to contact the owner’s Representative Messrs. (Lawyers name)

Uncle Gizmo

Joined on Tue, May 11 2004

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