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We would like to take this opportunity in introducing Hyperion Company Limited for your consideration in adding our company to your list of approved suppliers.

Hyperion Company Limited was established in 2009 with the Registrar General Department with the main objectives of importing general goods, Vehicles, Heavy Duty construction equipment.

Hyperion Company Limited is one of the youngest and fasters growing company in the field of procurement activities.

We have been successful at our procurement mandates because of our:

· ability to deliver our goods in a timely manner

· ability to deliver quality goods to our clients’ specifications

· Competent staff and professional service.

Some of our achievements to date are as follows:

· Delivery of 200 Wuyong motor bikes

· 25,000 Wellington boots

· 15,000 Working uniforms
· 10,000 cutlasses

Hyperion Company Limited intends to prove its worthiness as a reliable supplier and its ability to deliver value to your company and its various affiliates.

Thank you very much for considering our request.

Sincerely yours,
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Hello, Nana - and welcome to English Forums. I suggest:

We would like to take this opportunity to introduce you to Hyperion Company Limited.

Hyperion was established and registered in 2009 with the main objectives of importing general goods, vehicles, and heavy duty construction equipment, and we are now one of the fastest growing companies in the field of procurement.

We have been successful because of our:
· ability to deliver our goods in a timely manner
· ability to deliver quality goods to our clients' specifications
· competent staff and professional service

To date, our procurement and delivery achievements have included 200 Wuyong motor bikes, 25,000 Wellington boots, 15,000 work uniforms and 10,000 cutlasses, and we are ready to supply you with your needs, whatever they may be – promptly, efficiently and cost-effectively.

Hyperion intends to prove its reliability as a supplier and its ability to deliver value to your company and all its operations. Please give us a try.

Thank you very much for your consideration. If you have any questions or concerns, please contact us at [phone address] or Email Removed.

Sincerely yours,
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