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Guest  #99015  Fri, 13 May 05 06:25 PM
I am wanting to invite a Credit Risk Manager to our organization to help correct some of our broken processes. Please help me correct my letter. p.s I love this website, just came across it today.

Here is my letter:

Dear Person:

We would like to invite you to learn more about our organization and the issues that impact our Hispanic Market. While in our center you can visit with Team Leads and Director.
You will gain a clearer understanding of the opportunities that we are faced with each day. Giving you an insight on what our customers are faced with as a unique market.
We would also like to see your perspective coming from the Credit Management side of the house.
We are looking forward to working in partnership to provide a win/win solution for our customers, consultants, and company.

Please tell us when you plan to attend, so that we can make some arrangements for you.



Regards,
Name
Process Analyst
  
Mister Micawber  #99521  Sun, 15 May 05 08:56 AM

Dear Sir:

We would like to invite you to learn more about our organization and the issues that impact our Hispanic market. While at our center, you can visit with team leaders and the Director. We hope that you will gain a clearer understanding of the opportunities that we are presented with each day, and an insight into our customers as a unique market. We would also like to benefit from your perspective as the credit management side of the house. We are looking forward to working in partnership in order to provide a win/win solution for our customers, our consultants, and our company.

Please advise us when it would be convenient for you to attend, and we will make all the necessary arrangements.



Best regards,

(Name)
Process Analyst
  
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