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Latest post Wed, Mar 11 2009 1:19 PM by Clive. 1 replies.
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changeling  +  685495 Wed, 11 Mar 09 10:44 AM
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Hi everybody!

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I’m not sure if I express it correctly. Below are variants. Can you help to choose?

 

After the first day of competition Mikhail led, outstripping the nearest rival by 5 scores.

After the first day of competition Mikhail got on top, keeping the nearest athlete (rival) 5 scores behind.

After the first day of contest Mikhail was a leader, edging out the nearest athlete (rival) by 5 scores.

 

Thanks in advance

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Clive  +  685528 Wed, 11 Mar 09 01:19 PM
Hi,

I’m not sure if I express it correctly. Below are variants. Can you help to choose?

Don't say 'scores'. Probably points, depending on the type of competition.
Say 'his nearest . . . '.
'Competition' is more idiomatic than 'contest'.

I'd say something like this.

After the first day of the competition, Mikhail was leading / was the leader, 5 points ahead of his nearest rival.

Here are a few comments.

After the first day of competition Mikhail led, outstripping the nearest rival by 5 scores.
'Outstripping' is not a common word in speech.

After the first day of competition Mikhail got on top, keeping the nearest athlete (rival) 5 scores behind.
During the first day, he got on top. After the first day, he was on top.

After the first day of contest Mikhail was a leader, edging out the nearest athlete (rival) by 5 scores.
'Edging out' sounds a bit like the competition is finished and Mikhail won.

Best wishes, Clive

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