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melyb023
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Thu, 25 Nov 04 06:14 PM
Growing up in a family with guidance up until the ninth grade. Having no guidance from that oint on because my parents who never really knew anything about the SAT's, applaying to college, financial aid, or how to get me to higher education. I, being lost asked my friends for help and there was just so much they could do. I still had hundreds of questions; I asked teachers and they also had limited answers.
*********Let me kno wat u think........
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~*~Melissa a.k.a Tush~*~
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nona the brit
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Fri, 26 Nov 04 07:25 PM
You need to work on the punctuation and ensure that you are using complete sentences.
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The name says it all.
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abbie1948
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Thu, 24 Mar 05 06:21 PM
I think you need to work on this a little. The first sentence doesn't really make sense. Are you writing about your education, and the support you received from your family?
Do you mean "I attended school up to the ninth grade, and received a lot of support from my family. I found it difficult to find all the information I needed to apply to college for higher education. My family and friends could not help with advice, and even my teachers could not answer all my questions."
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Hope that helps. Abbie
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Anonymous,
4 yr 88 days ago
Well I think that its a nice letter but, you need to work on your spellings and your sentencing doesn't make any sense but, you do sound like a very educated student who cares about your work.Keep on trying your best thought.Good luck with everything!
Yours truely, Brionna
Anonymous,
2 yr 179 days ago
as i cv it aint quite correct my dear. but if you want i can help you in it ![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif)
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